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    English Essay 1 - Descripive or Narrative



    Reflection


    We are to write a description of a chosen object in this particular essay. my chosen object is a paintbrush.
    I wrote in a first person point of view to make it more alive and mysterious. The reader will have to read through the essay and make a smart guess of the object. The most important thing that I learnt through this assignment is meticulous observation skill. Before writing, I need to observe carefully my chosen object and notice the details. This is an important skill for reinterpretation of an object. However, my writing was not vivid and attention grabbing enough. The description is not vivid enough and the structure is too monotonous.  

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